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3 min Bracelet by Kamis0ri89

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This is beautiful for 3 minutes. I have a younger sister that makes braclets, but she makes it from hemp, resulting in a lot of time.

Vision for me was good. I guess if you had fixed the center loop a bit so it was nicely shaped it would of worked better.

Originality here is great. I've not seen someone do 3 minute task on a braclet before so well done to you for doing this!

Technique is good! It must of been difficult to create this in 3 minutes and I feel that it's great!

Impact was good, so good it got me too look and critique it in the first place! :meow:

Keep up the good work!
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:iconkamis0ri89:
Kamis0ri89 Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the critique. ^_^
The center ring in the clasp a little off shape because I never made a clasp like it. but thanks for the point out.
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TheOneAndOnly-K Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^;
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Kamis0ri89 Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Don`t sweat it ^_^ your my first Critique. I love the insight from other peoples perspective it gives me ideas and changes that make people more interested in my work.
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TheOneAndOnly-K Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Mhm. I feel the same, however I never recieve critiques :c
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Kamis0ri89 Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I would critique some of your. But I have been told i`m mean even when I`m being nice.
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TheOneAndOnly-K Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
*shrugs* I like mean ;P
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Kamis0ri89 Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
well you could start by attracting more people to your page. Also feature some of your work on the front of your page so it is easy to look at. I had to dig to find your work.
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TheOneAndOnly-K Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yes I know =.=
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